Comments of chapter undefined of Slice of life in Tensuraverse

hmm it's decent there is a room for improvement i hope you focus on how your mc interact or influence the plot don't just copy the original all the time.and i hope you don't use things like references and cringe anime logic too much . lastly you can make mc personality carefree like gojo with some pride like anos not cringe.i hope this helps.keep up the good work:⁠-⁠)

This chap was cringe and the slime couldn’t see until the dragon told him about magic sense

tyftc Author

Mc personality leaves much to be desired

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Thanks for the chapter 📖😁👍