Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Time Traveler

Naruto: Time Traveler

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Novel_Lover_2360Lv3Novel_Lover_2360

First of all It's annoying that he stole the body And the fact that he's gonna lose all his physical and Chakra progress is so bad If you can fix these problems it would be better

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ruben_petitLv1ruben_petit

gracia por en capitulo

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executionnerLv2executionner

By using too many words, you say too little and repeat too much. This habit will tire you in the future, negatively affect your enthusiasm, and make writing difficult. You need to stop explaining the obvious. Sentences like "The aim is to learn everything that can be learned at school" are not good, yaz-san. enjoy your work. You have talent but it needs to be polished a bit[img=recommend]

executionnerLv2executionner

Danzo will catch him, right?[img=faceslap]

The_Best_3329Lv4The_Best_3329

Man i already dislike the time travel bs there will be so many loopholes i just cant

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Daniel_Ferreira_9355Lv2Daniel_Ferreira_9355

Na minha opinião essa coisa de energia pra voltar no tempo tá errado, seria melhor uma limitação, tipo ele só pode voltar no tempo a depois que passar o tempo que ele voltou anteriormente, tipo se ele voltou 2 meses no tempo ele tem que esperar 2 meses e 1 dia, se não no futuro o cara vai dar spam de izanagi infinito

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