Comments of chapter undefined of Dimension-Defying Chat Syndicate

please revise the use of pronouns it confuses me a lot that sometimes you refer to the MC as a boy and sometimes as a girl also the mobile is an object so the pronoun is IT and please revise what you write after doing it there are some grammar errors(that's not that important but you sometimes repeat thing that have already been said like two words before.) but apart from that that is annoying because it confuses me it's good the story for now continue with your work :c

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Gracias por el capítulo

grat ch

great chapter

tftc

Thanks for the chapter, really interesting level I'm going to subscribe to patreon because I can't wait, please keep this up for a long time