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Comments of chapter undefined of HP: A Country's Dark Legacy

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DaoistyzeBIf
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I like it

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Soulderean
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Thanks for the Chapter 😁

Anthiaris
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For a first ff you are doing really really well, you seem to have a somewhat original world fleshed out, created differents sides, jobs and purpose for each talent, well done ! Now for the ability part, it bothers me a little since abilities are inherent to a person or a family, it doesn't make sense for him to "sell" it, nor for them to want it since you don't buy a talent, youare born with it, same as the Blacks and their metamorphmagus, I would like for it to stay an exclusivity to the MC, I don't really have an issue in you selling it but please make it impossible for 99.9% to learn for some reason. Moreover you exlained that Abilities are deritaive of generation of mages using or being strong in a field or a type a magic, so much that it translates into an ability, so there is 0 way other people can learn it. Nobody other than the Blacks were ever metamorphmagus