jankian
i dont like how cultivators with such a low realm have abilities of gods and also the speed of cultivation that means he will become the strongest by chapter 50 or something like that but other than that im liking how the english got better in just a few chapters and the story
yes, it’s my first time actually writing a story, so I kind of got carried away with making him like that, so now I have to try to find a way to like slow it down. Find a better pace so he’s not getting breakin realms each chapter lol Will probably have to make it so that since he cultivate spirit beast techniques it will be slower than normal techniques