daniel_vera
At the beginning of each chapter, it would be nice if you could tell us what year it is, because I confess that I don't know what year it is, nor how old Ed is or something like that (year 270, 5 years left until the start of the show) if you could give an indication of Where are we in the story, it's been years since I watched the series and I never read the book, I can't remember some details. Just an idea, it's up to you to see what's best for your story.