Comments of chapter undefined of Malivoire Descent

Well the beginning of novel is Good 👍 Lets start another ride of another world 🤓

superb first chapter👍

Already hooked right from the first Chapter Really nice😌

This is...Lit. like this is the best first chapter i have ever seen for an apocalypse kind of novel. Your previous works have always been awesome but this one is just... on another level entirely. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

OMG. This is one heck of a chapter. I really love this Malivoire Descent type of apocalypse. The best introduction to this type of story I have ever seen, to be honest. I'll be waiting for the next chapter, Author

I see this novel on someone reading list so I thought why not give it a try generally I don't comment on novel except my fav one so it's also become one of my favorites I just hope author will not drop it like sone other authors because the can't get power stone or gifts in early stage I hate them

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

This part is surely skipped and go like tens years ago, Earth blah-blah, but the author brought it out splendid

as I advise other authors. make sure to reread. I will start commenting mistakes and corrections once I start reading continuously.

A bit generic since the MC is at the bottom of the food chain, but good job with the first chap💯

Hmm I need to read more it seems decent ig tho

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Nothing special yet but so far so good Hopefully it gets better or dosent get worse

First chapter is a bit rushed for me love the terms though

I need more chapters to decide

First chapter was good, already feeling it.

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

hey, dream. Forteller, here. Waited for your message on discord, but it's all good. Message me when you see this. Made you something.

The first chapter is pretty good . The magic and power is alluring and makes me want to flip the next page .