Comments of chapter undefined of Life in DxD After Becoming a Legend
Life in DxD After Becoming a Legend
Poponioko
Chapter comments7
Honestly disappointed . Well hope you keep working on this story. I feel like there is too many restrictions too little involvement with the MC himself and no noteworthy interactions. Everything seems litghtly brushed on and rushed, along with an MC that is just giving excuses like a 3rd rate dumbledore specifically since only recently he got his visions, he got a family immediately abandoned them and just gives excuses and pushing them away, etc etc
Hmm, I understand what you mean about the storyline so far. What I can answer is that the chapter so far is only a prologue and the story about Mc is only a foundation for me to create more creative stories in future stories that are not always based on canon. After this the story will be continued by his children who follow the flow of the original story that has been messed up due to Mc's actions.
