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Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel: I've got the Omnitrix

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PhantomNite629
PhantomNite629Lv15PhantomNite629

thx for the chap

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kingthegodofnight
kingthegodofnightLv4kingthegodofnight

Finally a non Harem fanfic ( And I hope it stay that way ). Like if you see any fanfic on this app 80 to 85 % are Harem and if it's not a Hare fanfic it will be mc doing all kind of bad thing just for power. So far so good, Mc don't look like a person who would do bad things just because he has power ( like Chinese ), Also author don't make it look like mc is taking someone else place or you can read some comic a get a plot twist from their as we mostly don't read comic so we won't know even if mc replace someone. You can have MCU as bass and Comic as plot twist. If you can make Mc sleep here and there with super heroine's ( just as fun time like how in comic they do some time, don't make it serious ). and don't make mc a jerk as well Hopefully you won't drop it

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Benoit_Valtin
Benoit_ValtinLv10Benoit_Valtin

you have a much better chapter and the use of the N word is not overuse there is a real reason. I am happy

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Abdiezmann
AbdiezmannLv4Abdiezmann

How does the watch look like tho

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wormmusimsenja
wormmusimsenjaLv4wormmusimsenja

Will the MC take alien DNA samples to add to the omnitrix? like venom? (TL)

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WarMachine78
WarMachine78Lv14WarMachine78

Thanks for the chapter

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mythicZed_
mythicZed_Lv4mythicZed_

well, the timeline is weird, but it's ok. although, if it'll only be 2 years till the true plot, that's like leaving no time at all for technological progression anyway. so I feel you just wanted to make the years all wonky just so you could give a sexy car to the MC!

Aurelius04
Aurelius04Lv13Aurelius04

Stupid