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Comments of chapter undefined of Bloodbound Devil (Multi-Cross, DxD, Rosaria Vampire, Seikon no Qwaser)

lord_Azathoth
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The story became boring because MC began to focus a lot on an unimportant character and wasting time on her instead of focusing on increasing his strength and experience. I mean, I do not see the benefit of adding Jeanne's character to the story other than making filler chapters out of it. I mean dxd has no shortage of women

Vostarian
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Noted. Thou, this part of the story is a transition for the starting timeline of DxD/Rosario/Qwaser series. This is where he first makes his mark on the Supernatural World after crushing his Vampire family. This part is where I build the connection with Vatican (Xenovia, Irina, Griselda, Asia, and other figures of the Church) The boring part was the initial build up. Now that we're past this stage with the Vampires finding his location, he'll only have to do a cleansing and make an example of the 'hunters'. This incoming part is also critical in building the self-confidence of the MC, afterall, he inhabits the body of a Monster (Final Boss-type character) Thanks for the feedback, I take note of them, and will not try to drag things. Also, as for Jeanne, for some she might be unnecessary, for others she's okay, however, I have to note that she is an important piece in. With her starts the polygamous relationship, from her, the domino pieces start falling and it wouldn't make it too 'awkward' for the heroines to settle themselves in this Harem situation.