WrightBrothers
I read a comment saying your work is no different from the anime. It's partially true. But,to say, Hachiman should be more proactive and open towards yukino( not entirely but a little bit, of he was 0% at this stage in cannon now he should atleast be 15% now.). Also many people misinterpreted Yui, she is not nice and a schemer. Also this Hachimam with inworld experience and some glimpses from Anime he should have known about Yui and Iroha schemes. I would like to talk to you regarding this like reddit or discord, if you don't mind.