honestly the conversations have gotten better, hp is just difficult cause they are children so it isn't easy to make it flow perfectly but you have definitely made a lot of improvements in regards to the story
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Great chapter. I’m kinda tired right now so maybe that’s why I didn’t understand, but can you go into more detail about their plan with Narcissa and Lucius and why they need to make a deal with them specifically?