NunuXD
It's great to read a story without this world with superpowers everywhere, something simpler, for me that was your big mistake in GAME DEVELOPER SYSTEM, it would be much more interesting something focused more on the real world, someone creating their game studio in america ("I commented on america simply because most game development stories take place in Japan, which is quite boring, they miss a great development opportunity by putting the story in a perspective of facing the powerful Japanese game and console companies ")