Son_Karuto
it just takes away from the action and the flow of the ff. it works in the game because its in the game format. in a reading format its just awkward. if you dont want to write about multiple charaters you should send the ones not in your party to do other quests (quests that translates badly into reading format). I also think you made the mc too powerful, like how does he know how to use all those techniques and apllications of the techniques right away? he should unlock the techniues gradually and not all at once, it will get boring if he is just that op at the start. just a suggestion since you wanted my opinion.
Son_Karuto:In what way? I would like your input cause I was thinking of going away from that and actually have fights like not turn based.