Comments of chapter undefined of How I Started a War in a Children's Cartoon

Is there some problem with the chapter? It looks fine to me.

Good chapter, I hope you continue with this story without setbacks. (The 2018 image I had in my gallery curiously matches another story) - although I don't remember which story I created this image for -

I cant read

Might wanna reformat this chapter

Thanks for the hard work

Thanks for the chapter. Author please check & improvise the arrangement of sentences in chapter.