Mastar_Chef
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This Sounds like a Great start but the problem is some bad grammar in some places so if you ever get in to a spot that you just don't know where to continue this novel from try and rewrite it because by then your grammar should be much better
and I look forward to the future updates
I haven't read any of this book but I can already tell that it's great and it needs a lot more than 4 chapters LOL đ§¸đ
Hey mate can you please pick a name it gets annoying reading y/n in some fics, loving it so far