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Comments of chapter undefined of Starting a new faction in the Halo universe with StarCraft Technology

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User_Derp
User_DerpLv1User_Derp

This Sounds like a Great start but the problem is some bad grammar in some places so if you ever get in to a spot that you just don't know where to continue this novel from try and rewrite it because by then your grammar should be much better

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world_domination
world_dominationLv4world_domination

I haven't read any of this book but I can already tell that it's great and it needs a lot more than 4 chapters LOL 🧸😂

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Agent_Wolfz
Agent_WolfzLv3Agent_Wolfz

Hey mate can you please pick a name it gets annoying reading y/n in some fics, loving it so far