Comments of chapter undefined of Grimm: Reborn into the Grimm TV series

Thanks for the chapter 📖😁👍

love the novel

like it

Ok, good idea, but the storytelling needs a lot of work. I mean, not to be offensive, but this looks more like the chapter translation than a FF story. Don't worry, it's normal when you start, so from now on, try to turn the story into a good narrative and soon this will look as a proper novel; I can prevent you, the first docens products will be horrible, the next hundreds bad, but for the time you start counting in thousand you'll be good, so don't haste and grow patiently.