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Comments of chapter undefined of Reincarnation in DxD with wishes

Z3RG102077
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Until this chapter, the conversations and characters feel as if they don't have emotions or soul, just mechanical dialogue, but it remains readable; I hope it improves in the upcoming chapters.

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Daoist5RvI4q
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Yea keep the chapters coming

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Maizuky_Nichan
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Hum...

LeonardoDiCaprio1
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good chapter keep it up

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Universe_Supreme
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I just hope that the shadow monarch powers won't be abused since it would feel like all his training was worthless if his shadow soldiers do everything

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HalfazHipocrite
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Waiting on the mc to sic his mom on his dad. (In public) Hey dad, why didn’t you take mom out for X. Hey dad you are taking mom out to X right? I did the second irl cause my dads an idiot. He and his wallet hate me but meh. Happy wife happy life?

DaoistF1yTLe
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good chapter

michael_whiteley
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Thanks for the chapter

WolfLord
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Thanks for the chapter on a good story.

F_C3
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BeastNaBh
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The conversations are monotonous it's like robots speaking without any feelings. And you should change the way of writing dialogues as these kinds of dialogues are not very friendly in novels. And the other thing you can do is describe everything from third person perspective for the better understanding of the readers. Because I don't see much of devlopment in these things and all I see is MC doing his own thing and those monotonous dialogues. This thing if not taken earlier will make you lose your current audience as they will get bored of these .

MercenaryRollen
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