Comments of chapter undefined of ANBU: Card System In Naruto
ANBU: Card System In Naruto
EchoingDusk
Chapter comments29
author, here is some constructive criticism I have . first) . the plot is progressing too fast, we have no emotional attachment to the mc, it was just some info dump and her in the hospital for the majority of the chapters, so the high stakes dangerous missions don't feel that high stakes . second) . you should have continued with the Kushina idea, just to focus on some world building and some slice of life before we get to the war/ action . third) it seems you use some ai not a lot as I have noticed, but ai has some very distinct way to describe things. i know because I use ai for my own drafts, so removal of those descriptions would be better, as many people now drop stories which are using ai. this is all i have to say for now and am curious how you manage her changing her bloodline and hope you give a satisfactory answer. and not some bull. also please don't make the mc op, as it removes all the stakes in the plot. hope you take some advice from my feedback. keep up the good work
