Comments of chapter undefined of Transmigration through multiverse

More chapters pls

to be honest the story isnt bad but the characters are too blant i cant fell nothing while Reading, and It is realy rushed i dont know If you Just whant to finish something before you start the main part or what but i can say that It isnt the way If you whant to engage your readers, i cant point How to do It better because i'm not good with that but i can point where you should try to improve, and It is the dialogues and the narrative, i dont know How to explain that to you Sorry about that but that is what i fell when i was Reading, you have a realy interesting thing in you hands your mc is Op and the god did let It clear the reason why he is reincarnating the MC even If the MC dont know as for his wishs the only think i didnt understand is why he chose Odin and Athena since tecnicaly Odin can do everything Athena does and more (this is speculations bases on theyr divinity since his skills wasnt explained) except for that details his wishs where Op and realy good now It is up to you How to make It interesting one adivinhe dont try to force situations like a oponente the MC can Deal Just to make drama out of the blue Just to Go e the MC a chalemge that wont work até least not until much latter in the novel when you start to operate on multiversal or omniversal level before that i recomend dont force those situations om the MC If you whant to make something like that do It for those around the MC with a reason for the MC to not interfer, something like that character need a chalenge to pass a limit he was haking in his streng growth or something but for those thing to Work you Will have to find a way of giving emotions because in the moment you can state How the character are feeling but It dont realy feel like nothing. . i think i Will stop here because i am starting to repeat my self and going on a loop. that Said It isnt bad you Just need to improve yourself and sadly i cant help with that because i dont know How to do that i can Just point out Sorry. (i am not droping at least for now i Will stay here to see If you Will improve If you dont improve nothing after 30 chapter and i mean nothing like things staying the same as they are ,i am out)

thanks for the chapter... good day to all who read