Comments of chapter undefined of Studying under Orochimaru, the Evil Scientist of Hidden Leaf Village
I really liked the novel. I'll take your suggestion and make my athempt in a jutsu with more science involved. For me is vibrations in general. The sound village was underused(it had quite the potential If I may say), dealing with the origin of the idea due to the bond between orochimaru and his future village, where he can follow tayuya aproach (genjustu+sound), quake aproach (mcu daisy), super op whitebeard (that could be an ultimatum with high costs), stealth using light, (wich could be related to his study to radiation), gathering sun light increasing the energy of the sun in a substance (like megido from slime series), using is light research to make an spectrometer (extremely usefull for his future research), lasers (distaistless for me but oh well), vibrations to cancel sound and/or atacks (taking advantage of the fact that two sounds can cancel each other). Other sciences that could be usefull, piezoelectricity (electricity by touch ) pyroelectricity (the same but with fire to nullify fire ninjutsu directed to him), use of cyanide on cookies (a little easter egg of the character recolecting apple seeds and making something out of it) , use of water ninjutsu without any salt (because water doesn't conduct electricity) {I know that this is not his main chakra attributes but hey, you can justify it by hashirama's phisique on play to deal with kakashi's/sasuke's raikiri et al}. A railgun (too used but hey, an idea), use of thermite in clever ways (that thing is easy to make and adding to his fire attribute could be good). In medical field, use his insect to introduce a virus to his host (like the dengue and the mosquito), he can try and research retrovirus wich are more unpredictable, creating tissues/new cells using daylight (just like plants adding C to grow, to regenerate his limbs with less chakra expenditure) And well,that is all that I could think about. If you like anything of the above, feel free to use it (or maybe not). All in all, I liked your novel and i apologize if I made any spelling mistake (or grammar wich I am sure I made) because english is not my first language.
