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Comments of chapter undefined of The True Heir of the Four Greats of Hogwarts BL Yaoi

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multiverses_sage
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boyfriend

EtherealStar
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it's in the title. yaoi and BL

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Blue_neko
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Hello The story is great but I suggest you edit it and put some “” to sentences that are spoken and spaces or paragraph for comfort of reading. Thank you 😊

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DaoistDs3l4S
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This was actually pretty sad. I like it.

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Ester_Nascimento
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Coloque um traço (-) antes do diálogo dos personagens por favor, porque lendo do jeito que está me perco na hora da leitura