Comments of chapter undefined of Jujutsu Kaisen : Legacy of the Senju
Jujutsu Kaisen : Legacy of the Senju
Impulsive_69Author
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It started out well, but now it doesn't please me personally anymore. First, are you using cursed energy like chakra or ki, rasengan, genjutsu and cero? It kind of doesn't make sense to me, the only person who used something similar to this was Rika, in the film, a concentrated blast of cursed energy. Secondly, ROB's presence wasn't funny, in fact, it was a bit demotivating, and what's the point of increasing energy reserves if he was born with high energy reserves... Adding things like the tree after starting the story is pretty boring too. The author writes well, I'm being very critical, a side effect of reading fics for so long, you just want high level and not something so open. Thank you and good luck.
it would have been better if instead of Hashirama level potential having Divine tree technique with sage mode incorporated as well as immense cursed energy reserves, you made it so that every senju has a lot of cursed energy, at least first class, often special grade, and Hashirama having more than sukuna or yuta. As for the techniques, you could have made it so that every Senju are either born with Yamato's level wood technique(kekkai genkai) or a bootleg sage mode (similar to Jiraya, where it only grants immense strength and speed). One or the other, it would have granted Senju the needed potential to contend with clans such as zennin or gojo. Only when a sorcerer is born with both those techniques, can they combine and unleash their true might, combining wood manipulation technique and quasi-sage mode giving the potential to rival such giants as Sukuna. When together, the techniques would have worked to amplify each other, Sage mode granting wood release the capability to sense through trees and even create a battlefield for yourself, while the wood release would have increased the sage technique capabilities, increasing it's specs across the board, making the sorcerer a true juggernaut on a battlefield.
