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Love the chemistry between Rias and Takumi but i especially Loved the Cliffhanger more especially because i am certain Azazel is gonna realize He didnt Originally have 3 sacred Gears maybe Not... On another Note maybe MC should get all the Produktion proficiencies afterall maybe Crafting His own Wards with Weaving, Alchemy, and Seals/Runes/Glyphs etc...
Really liked the date between Rias and the MC. Nice to read a FanFiction not so anti Rias. Get a little more frustrated with every chapter that ends in the MC still being human. No idea the reason why he keeps putting it off it was just explained thru monologue when he turned down the initial offer that he was waiting till she was desperate to negotiate. But nothing about what he actually wanted. If it’s money or materials she’d already give that stuff now. She built Issei a mantion and he didn’t even ask for it. Just feels like it’s pushing off getting to cannon plot unnecessarily at this point. Loovr the MC and the way you write Rias mostly. Looking forward to the way you write the main peerage members. Please be gentle with Akeno she’s my favorite! Really like the story so far just get a little dissapointed every chapter that ends with the MC still human