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Comments of chapter undefined of Return of the Demonic Emperor!

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AddictedSolis
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You put a villain tag and call him a demon emperor and then you say that he is feeling guilty are you thinking straight author? Fix it pla

AddictedSolis
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Oh my fault then, sorry, didn’t catch the humour out intent, I keep reading these novels with fake villains so I seem to be on lookout for stuff that will act as the same, so I can be sure to drop the book, if it’s humorous I am glad I continued reading, just a opinion I feel like the humerous intent would be better if you said “ he walked up with a smile and a guilty tone, the words sorry not sorry slipped out of his mouth as his eyes revealed excitement”

Emberlight:It was supposed to appear humorous! Guess I failed to express it properly, I'll change the sentence to something else, Thank you!