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Comments of chapter undefined of COTE: Harem Route

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COTE: Harem Route

Evil_Villain

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YouthEAZA
YouthEAZALv1YouthEAZA

I think you are making him too emotional at this point... He is not that expressive, he is always a poker face. maybe you should fix that.

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Evil_Villain
Evil_VillainAuthorEvil_Villain

I know he is poker face, but it's too bland to write it that. Besides, when I was reading the light novel, I notice that the author gives Ayanokoji all sorts of internal thoughts as though he is an ordinary guy. So...I thought of making him express it a little to ensure that he remains ordinary. It kinda also makes the story a bit more fun to write for me xD.

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Luisz_Rodriguez
Luisz_RodriguezLv3Luisz_Rodriguez

IA?

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rafa_espi
rafa_espiLv2rafa_espi

Are you using the false narrative that Ayanokouji uses in the novel?

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