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Comments of chapter undefined of Ultimate Being from the Tokonosu City

Maybonnie
MaybonnieLv2Maybonnie

Wow...Smart

Asura_Vajra
Asura_VajraLv6Asura_Vajra

The speed at which a woman falls in love with him the moment an Akikan Protagonist enters the same plane of existence:

CamlEnvy
CamlEnvyLv4CamlEnvy

Love is about the "plot".

Luizz_Ricardo
Luizz_RicardoLv10Luizz_Ricardo

I like the author's writing, I like the worlds but the protagonist is very bad, extremely boring and with a forced charisma, this hypocritical thing about being a good person was supposed to be humor, but it lost its fun, this is mentioned all the time, what are the protagonist's ambitions? so much potential that the MC has but it's a waste of people

FAP_Master_
FAP_Master_Lv6FAP_Master_

Ty

Luizz_Ricardo
Luizz_RicardoLv10Luizz_Ricardo

the protagonist ruins the fanfic, a forced charisma that the author tries to give to the protagonist

jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

Me gusta este MC , mandado a la M , osea si estuviera en su lugar y tuviera esas posibilidades del MC , podría ir a cualquier lugar y sería más beneficios ( un ejemplo viaja y de casualidad tiene un encuentro con un descendiente de antiguos hashiras que fueron poderosos , y lo único que haría ser por cada lugar que viaja , dar un saludo de manos y coleccióna poderes como si fuera caramelos ( y si puede sintetizarlas o combinar elementos, sería mas potente).

ArdaPendragon
ArdaPendragonLv4ArdaPendragon

Thanks for chapter

Tarsino
TarsinoLv1Tarsino

The easiest way to make 'something/A' look good is to make 'something/B' look bad so that when compared, the results are clear. It appears that the Author is trying to demonize the Demon Slayer Corps. So I wonder, what will the MC achieve? Or maybe the Author is just offering a new perspective of the DSC.

Hum_
Hum_Lv4Hum_

thanks for the chapter

YunZhiXue
YunZhiXueLv4YunZhiXue

Kagaya: Can you explain the reason? MC: " I'm afraid of dying, and also busy looking for HAR... ahem, wife I mean ". Kanae: (blushing) "" Mc : (Why are you blushing). Hashira : Hmm... Women will only slow down drawing my sword. Mc: (annoyingly single).

One_Singularity
One_SingularityLv14One_Singularity

Tftc

PK_Basketboy
PK_BasketboyLv14PK_Basketboy

thx for the new chapter and give me more

Maradilue
MaradilueLv13Maradilue

👍

magapi
magapiLv4magapi

too much monologue, couldn't enjoy this 2 chap.

Jama1810
Jama1810Lv4Jama1810

TYSMFTC

Evoler
EvolerLv3Evoler

Thanks for the chapter!!!!!

Naruto_uzumaki_7792
Naruto_uzumaki_7792Lv4Naruto_uzumaki_7792

I just want to ask why you like the cliche that is, why can't you tell him that you don't want to join your organization because it's illegal instead of saying stupid things like that you're afraid of death?Q Yes, he has, but it's as if he said it to provoke others. It seems like you gave him a lot of Chinese novels. He likes to act weak to eat the goose or the dragon like he was?

JKhero_141
JKhero_141Lv1JKhero_141

Thanks for chapter

F_C3
F_C3Lv1F_C3

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KingYasser
KingYasserLv15KingYasser

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️