Comments of chapter undefined of Fall of a King, Rise of a Villain

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Author, please correct me if I’ve made any wrong assumptions about this story! There are parts where I’m confused, so it’s hard for me to grasp the story correctly sometimes. Regardless, this was another nice chapter! I really do enjoy your writing style, although there are minor mistakes with tense usage. However, don’t stress too much about that because it doesn’t affect the readability of the story too drastically. It’s just something you may want to practice and get better at :). Also, I struggle massively with tense usuage as well, LOL, so let’s work hard together!