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Comments of chapter undefined of JJK: Red Priest Pathway

Ramses_The_Third
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This story is good, but the tone of the character grinds at me. Everyone speaks WAY too formal, like they have been reading a thesaurus. It makes everyone sound too similar. If you want, have it just be the MC, but having too much nuance in vocabulary can actually be a negative since it just doesn't match up with their personality and can end up making everyone sound irritatingly identical.

rosasola
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Ok, the counter strategy to Kenjaku's plan is shaping up, Mechamaru's multiple puppets would be very useful in not only temporarily distracting curses like Hanami and Dagon (saving the lives of many normal people) if he survives Mahito, but simply describing Kenjaku to Gojo makes his sealing completely impossible. Now, if that did not happen this story could end in Shibuya, because even Sukuna with 15 fingers shouldn't be able to do anything against Gojo, just one clash of domains would be enough to get everyone's attention, and he and MC should be perfectly capable of holding him back until Itadori regain control. That's not counting his plan to fix Mai and Maki, so the sorcery schools team would have Toji 2.0 and a sorceress who should be able to copy Gremmy from Bleach, but without the weakness he has. And speaking of Itadori, I would still like to see him reach his full potential, especially after seeing him launch 8 black flashes in a row in the last chapter of the manga and use Sukuna's cuts. Another thing that hasn't been said is that Gojo should be slightly stronger than he was in canon, the only reason he didn't continue to grow in canon was because there was no reason or competition, and getting stronger would only make him more lonely, but here, after seeing the growth of Yuuta and Sukehiro, especially MC's D.E should have encouraged him to work at least a little. During his fight with Sukuna, the guy improved and adapted his D.E, now, thanks to MC he knows well how Sukuna's cuts work and that he has a domain without barriers, and I refuse to believe that he is not looking for a solution to that when it is common knowledge that all domains would lose because being weak to outside attacks.

Kaizer11
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Thanks for the chapter

ThiccThighs
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Tftc

Bonbonbla
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sow,,,,formal