Comments of chapter undefined of The Overlord of Mysteries
The Overlord of Mysteries
ChaosVoid_24
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If you like Batman so much you should have wrote a Batman novel then instead of writing a overlord novel and then adding Batman completely ruining it. Even better you could have written an overlord novel and have them transfer to dc instead of the new world. But no you chose the most random and worst way to add Batman. It wasn’t even meaningful and all his reasons for being Batman were dumb. He got more people killed than him doing nothing. There was no character development like you said. He was the same person anyways and nothing changed
ChaosVoid_24:Thank you for your feedback but I'm a Batman fan and I have enjoyed writing this part of the story more than the Yggdrasil Arc. I write what I enjoy writing, this is for my enjoyment and others who have similar taste. It's for me and those who like Batman. Thanks anyway, will keep it in mind. Since you have started reading this fic recently, if you don't like Batman or Joker, you could have skipped the whole Gotham Arc and moved straight to the Yggdrasil Arc. Anyway thank you for giving this fic a chance.
Not gonna lie, I had an easy time with being able to understand most of the first chapter even though I kept getting lost on what was happening. Though the same thing can be said for here as there seems to be little to no way of knowing who is talking about what, so despite me making sure to read everything thoroughly I feel lost by a great amount. Heck, that's probably why the Batman thing surprised me is because I was trying to tell what was happening before he became Bruce, & hence either forgot or glanced over the mentioning that he was going to be in the DC world for a short time. Or it wasn't said directly & him saying he wants to be like Bruce Wayne or whatever he specifically said wasn't picked up by me since I was so lost.
