Comments of chapter undefined of Conqueror Of Hearts And Realms

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How did the truck find itself in the forest? xD

I appreciate any thoughts or changes people would like to see to the first chapter. I have been getting mixed opinions about really only the 1st chapter so I have decided to mostly rewrite the entire thing. Any problems you see or feel should be modified are welcome in my comment section or review section. Swat reactions and modified dialogue will be changed very soon. Don't give up on the story just because of the 1st chapter that will only get better as I get better at writing. I promise you that I have big plans for this novel, I just need time. Peace out for now -Astral_Pandemonium

wow, that's epic! I really wonder what he achieved by breaking his "wall"

chapter summarized in a gif:

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza