Comments of chapter undefined of I became Voldemort

In every HP fanfic Dumbledore and Voldemort feel out of character for me.

I honestly don't know whether to continue reading at this point, I'm already getting through a couple of chapters that are disappointing.

hmm that was interesting...

Man I really like this novel but now 😞😔 i think i will read another chapter to see what he does with dumberdol and leave it. it just a bad taste man 😞😞😶

I honestly don't know whether to continue reading at this point, I'm already getting through a couple of chapters that are disappointing.

Cyrus realy needs to increase his powers and expand his arsenal. What happened to the protege diabolica spell he created. Or couldn’t he use imperio on Lockhart, Albus Phoenix or his students or staff like filch to use them as cannon fodder against Albus. Next time he should keep the diary and The Diadem on himself and maybe use it to bolster his powers. I’m surprised he didn’t try to keep it better secured on himself after all the Horcruxs have been useful. Maybe next time he should just simply destroy the horcrux himself and absorb their soul shards to permanently gain their power and knowledge. And speaking of Horcruxs, couldn’t Cyrus somehow activate the Horcruxs in Albus possession to distract him. I’ve had an interesting idea What if he created a magical bag similar to beer scamanders suitcase where he could transport everything he needs in it. Maybe even put a few deathly creatures like snakes or inferi in it to use them against his enemies in the future.

I could think of a few ways how he could get out of this situation. He could try to convince Dumbledore that his existence alone could’ve changed things from the timeline and his future knowledge would be useful. Maybe someone witnesses what’s going on and goes to investigate. Albus would not realy be eager to kill someone if there are witnesses. Maybe Cyrus could call for help. Peter Pettigrew is still hiding as Ron’s Rat and he still possesses a death mark. He could call for him on help. Maybe Harry or his friends come to investigate Cyrus disappearance. Maybe they give him a second chance. After all he didn’t kill them despite having many opportunities. Maybe he could manipulate Dumbledore emotionally by revealing that Voldemort is going to kill Grindelwald to gain information about the elder wand. A time turner has a limited time maybe he just has to ensure Dumbledore runs out of it.

thanks for the chapters

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Thanks for the chapter

Thank you for the chapter.I want to ask a Question of mine , I feel like Cyrus made it to easy for Dumbeldore.I can understand that this was probably one of his best chances to survive ,but i feel like it was a bit reckless and kind of naive. Aulthough he knew who Dumbledore truly is and his Methods. To let Dumbledore experience Cyrus secret only leads to 3 different conclusions 1 Dumbeldores death 2 Dumbeldore survive and will be hunting Cyrus 3 Deffeat him and obliviate his Memories. Im looking forward how this will continue. Thanks for the hard Work.

Thanks for the chapter

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this is out of left field. Dumbledore was against killing to a crippling extent enjoy the bashing all you want but that is not something the OG Dumbledore would do. maybe lock him in a box only he knows the location of if he goes extreme but not killing.

yeah he needs to have dumbles believe that he killed tom and not him have him being the heir then show up in the great hall with the closing feast laying claim to the family as its head of house maybe have it like the snake the only way you can be the head