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Comments of chapter undefined of Konoha: The Template System

noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv13noobageddon_

too slow pace, its ok if the slow phase is cuz of to much happening in one day or one chap, and cuz of the conversation, but the reason of this ff slow pace is cuz of every action have to be describe. like i bend my finger up and down, then i face my plam upward, fist all my finger except the index finger, and curl it, repeating the motion of stretching and curling it, as if asking my opponent to come at me while stairing at him instensly etc, lol

Hyuga_Tobirama
Hyuga_TobiramaModeratorHyuga_Tobirama

I was hoping the mc was the grandson of Tobirama that would have been cool and having become the Senju clan head leading the Senju clan to greatness rather than having them die off like in canon. Thanks for the chapter

Zaeus07
Zaeus07Lv4Zaeus07

Too many different PoVs, we're here for the MC. Use sparingly for world building or not at all.

Pablomehi
PablomehiLv3Pablomehi

Next

INDRA32
INDRA32Lv5INDRA32

Thanks for the chapther

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StickMan
StickManLv3StickMan

Thanks for the update

blddevil
blddevilLv1blddevil

Can mc learn medical jutsu? Or is he limited by his template? Not being able to learn something the template doesn't know ? (Which wouldn't really work here, i refuse to believe tobirama create impure World reincarnation without a lot of testing) But can he become better than the template while not having maxed it out?

Luizz_Ricardo
Luizz_RicardoLv10Luizz_Ricardo

👍

Hammer_Black
Hammer_BlackLv4Hammer_Black

Thanks for chapter

Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4Azathoth2

thank you for the chapter 🙂

DaoistF0koDD
DaoistF0koDDLv2DaoistF0koDD

¡gracias por el capítulo! 😁 👍

Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁 👍

Zero93
Zero93Lv6Zero93

Thanks for chapter

The_GrandMagus
The_GrandMagusLv4The_GrandMagus

thanks for the chap. looking forward to reading more.

Travis_Btmb
Travis_BtmbLv13Travis_Btmb

Tftc

SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LISTLv5SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

Its chapters like these, where the short chapter is killing me.... whats the swish in camp?!

LOL_BIGGY
LOL_BIGGYLv14LOL_BIGGY

Keep it up