Comments of chapter undefined of Konoha: The Template System

I was hoping the mc was the grandson of Tobirama that would have been cool and having become the Senju clan head leading the Senju clan to greatness rather than having them die off like in canon. Thanks for the chapter

too slow pace, its ok if the slow phase is cuz of to much happening in one day or one chap, and cuz of the conversation, but the reason of this ff slow pace is cuz of every action have to be describe. like i bend my finger up and down, then i face my plam upward, fist all my finger except the index finger, and curl it, repeating the motion of stretching and curling it, as if asking my opponent to come at me while stairing at him instensly etc, lol

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Thanks for the chapther

Thanks for chapter

thank you for the chapter 🙂

Too many different PoVs, we're here for the MC. Use sparingly for world building or not at all.

¡gracias por el capítulo! 😁 👍

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁 👍

Thanks for chapter

thanks for the chap. looking forward to reading more.

Tftc

Its chapters like these, where the short chapter is killing me.... whats the swish in camp?!

Keep it up