Comments of chapter undefined of Hero? The Two Sides of the Same Coin

Seriously? Honestly, I thought they were too long and might make some people give up on the story before it really starts. But it's good to know that. I reread them yesterday and saw that there are some incorrect information in the middle. I'll fix that or just remove it if it doesn't change much of the rest of the chapter, and maybe later I'll repost them.