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I Fell Into A Third-Rate Smut Novel As A Trashy Gangster

Degenerate_Stephen

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SPIRIT_KINGLv12SPIRIT_KING

Sorry, but this chapter didn't evoke any sadness for me. Instead of telling us about love, it would be more impactful to convey it through the characters' actions. Sorry once again, I'm not being critical or anything; it's just my personal opinion. Maybe I'm heartless, I don't know man, but I just didn't feel any sympathy for them.

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Degenerate_StephenAuthorDegenerate_Stephen

Thanks a lot for the honest feedback. I'll try to improve <3

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Ragnall_D_EndLv3Ragnall_D_End

the chapter was great you are cooking indeed i was not wrong to praise yo

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Simp_for_YanderesLv3Simp_for_Yanderes

That's a quiet 100 IQ approach I'm shocked but the chapter rocked...

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chikennuggetLv2chikennugget

the author is cooking with this one

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Dark_Life_1Lv4Dark_Life_1

Really touching 🥹🫠

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SPIRIT_KINGLv12SPIRIT_KING

THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER

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unseenpickleLv12unseenpickle

Uhhh what happen to him only loving sierra?

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NoiirLv14Noiir

tyftc 😂 taxi driver be like 😂😂 when Xavier girl gonna come 😭 and if those two girls both got a half each then wat about her 😭

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The_Ruler_001Lv13The_Ruler_001

Tftc

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NoiirLv14Noiir

chapter when

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unseenpickleLv12unseenpickle

Also what’s the discord link?

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