Comments of chapter undefined of I Fell Into A Third-Rate Smut Novel As A Trashy Gangster
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After reading the next 2-3 chapters, if you still think I'm doing a bad job at storytelling, just let me know. I'll change it then ;)
SPIRIT_KING:I don't like how it sounds. She isn't that special...tbh. Having only one female lead is not enough. I get that you have written her well, but it would be wonderful if he had feelings for other girls too. Make it a proper harem. That's just my opinion. Do as you see fit.image
