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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Poison Born (Voting fan-fic)

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Francisco_Jimenez_2421
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First c second a

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Rillik
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I picked the Option "Combo" (A+B+D) With 30% on A and 35% on the other two, I.e Noburu will allocate that percentage of his time left on the choices Here's my reasoning: First Noburu, I chose A because He needs to relax at least 1/3rd of the time as too much training may strain his body and growth, also he has been stated as a lazy person when his taijutsu was mentioned so it would logically make sense for him to relax and chill, this should also help us understand his relationship with others in case we meet them, Thus preparing us for Future situations related to them, We need to have situational awareness i.e which characters we can interact with. second, why did I choose B as well, REMINDER, even if it's not needed, Noburu has been mentioned to rival a NARA albeit that Nara is as usual Lazy but still that's praise worthy, thus we need to slowly and gradually train tactical awareness of Our character, We can't just be lazy as we know the true dangers of this world while not knowing if he is that aware of the situation around him. Hopefully we can reach the Madara level of planning one day I.E Noburu will be marked as someone who has tactical awareness thus keeping him in a safe position (because they would be the brains of the team and must have as much priority as a healer). That should in theory mean he would be able to look for other research material for the library and also give us an option to visit the library from now Third and most importantly, Why i added Choice D, Because Personal STRENGTH is important as well, We don't know the consequences of death or such yet, if it's Perma death then it's game over, so we need to have tactical awareness and personal Strentgth to protect us from everyone. Notes for Author and other readers: my fellow readers, you don't need to write long messages like I did to explain your choices, you can continue as you did but by at least adding some extra sentences on why you chose it, it would give the author some context and ideas on that choice in case it gets selected, thus making it easier for the author to write a chapter and not getting the writer's block or demotivated, I am also quite sure they would love to see engaging debates on why certain choices are good, AGAIN, you DON'T need to explain why you chose it but rather it's a fun and engaging activity. It would also convince others to choose the same choices as you did Author, I would kindly request you add auxiliary chapters that explain certain mechanisms of this choice based fanfic and also to check out videos on DnD if you haven't already (it will help you manage certain aspects of this choice based fanfic better), Be more vocal and proud because you have done a good job on writing this concept. that's all, Thank you if you did read this long comment else stay safe and hydrated and healthy, I will probably not message this long from now on, since it's the very beginning of such a good concept, I felt the need to explain it more thoroughly and also help others understand how it could be more engaging.

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Bananas_7074
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1. A 2. B

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Swone56
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1.E 2.D

MrMike
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1. D 2. B