Osman8
I think you should use different translator because your one doesn't even makes sense what it is saying or not everything is same maximum of the time your characters Main character p u v changes from third person to first person and then your mistakes oh my god you have lots and lots of mistakes please fix it your stories really good your concept is similar to Chinese normal but you can do better than them by showing us how he got that system or what purpose in later in the chapter's