Comments of chapter undefined of The strongest human is a cheater
The strongest human is a cheater
Albinus_istamar
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Kofi_Lv3Kofi_
Kofi_Lv3Kofi_
what i mean is so much descriptive words but there are little impact, as you said this is a human fighting for the first time. also try to split long paragraphs too as it will make the fight more engaging. that's just my opinion tho. have a nice day
Albinus_istamar:Well, notice that I think that is precisely the point of this chapter, a normal person faces an enemy for the first time in a real fight, how would we see a monster for the first time? The excess of adjectives is causal, at least for me, the most vivid impressions are marked by a higher level of detail. I appreciate your opinion as well.
