Comments of chapter undefined of Game of Thrones: Gaint of the Reach

I like the premise, believe it to be a good start even with how vague it is truely. hopefully, the second chapter will be longer, but the biggest issue I see you having is Grammer and spelling, spelling predominantly. I recommend possibly writing on Google documents and having it automatically correct your mistakes as a sort of proofreading and self editing service. hopefully, this comment fuels your ambition and good luck.