PRIME_PRIMUS
So, the main character is male. Why is it in the female category?
The plot seems good. I don't really like it being from Ozai's POV but it's not that important. Now the grammar and pronouns and different kinds of punctuation, those are giving me the irk and I can't really keep reading lol
Great chapter
thanks for the chapter.
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Just edit a little and it'll be alright
I like the story and premise but their are obvious errors in numerous sentences that needs to be corrected.
