Comments of chapter undefined of Percy Jackson: Wouldn’t You know it

Gosh... it's annoying that Percy is intelligent at one moment and stupid and emotional at another. And the world is forcefully made harder to match his greater power...power that he doesn't seem to use very well other than for beating up everything in his way... I mean it's still fun but just like here with the police, he didn't even think of trying to learn how to manipulate the Mist nor did he try to stop Anabeth when she was clearly being manipulated. What was the point of sending the medusa head to Olympus when he could keep it as a weapon. couldn't he use that death chariot of the three hags to quickly get a ride to Los Angeles. Ugh sorry, don't mind me. great story, there's not much good PJO stories out there so keep up good work. just think about the actions of your characters whether they make sense in certain situations, and keep mind of their character and what you want them to act like. Is your character smart, or stupid. is Percy getting better acquainted with living as a demigod, is he getting more prepared, or is he just winging it all the time. so far I'm not sure since in the beginning it seemed like he was trying to prepare and nod all is just chaotic and his preparations dont seem to really do much for him. that he's even following the already broken prophecy when he knows they it shouldn't be viable anymore. sigh...I guess we just need more chapters Haha...

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