Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn As Xiao Yan in BTTH with a System

God it really feel mentally dry after 12 chapters , I feel that this fanfiction got super potential but the way it's made it seams tailored for cinese people only even after being translated into English , i mean some old saing are cool and profound in Chinese but once translated into English they seem silly children nonsense . I'll be honest the idea it's perfect the main character it's awesome story line more than perfect but if you don't fix the " only for Chinese makes sense" part it turns into a chore , my advice remake it better without the nonsense blabbering and I'll read this with pleasure , cheers .