Comments of chapter undefined of Playing PokeMMO In Another World

rhyhorn is one of your best members...y would you get rid of it...who needs spearow when you'll eventually have charizard as well as gyarados to cover flying type moves...also Abra can be an hm slave until it evolves and starts learning better moves...so gyarados, charmeleon, Abra, rhyhorn, victribel, cubchoo sounds a lot better

I would suggest when you describe something like quest and description of items only have all the detailed information once. Then just say the name of the quest without the description. In some of your chapters you say the quest with all that tex describing the quest then in just a few paragraphs you repeat it all again.

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