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In MHA With a Dimensional Trading Quirk

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Aledamonkey
AledamonkeyLv4Aledamonkey

Could you, for the love of god, stop changing the point of view you use in the middle of your story? Stop switching between first-person POV and third-person POV. Just stick with one and do not switch to the other to refer to your character, be consistent.

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Efthee
EftheeLv14Efthee

the dialogue between orachimaru and mc needs a bit of work, it's hard to determine who is speaking when. thx for the chapter

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Mortem_Ouroboros
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Did he sell you the DNA without getting a share of the sales?

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Wachdog
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Great_maid_Oni
Great_maid_OniLv4Great_maid_Oni

The chapter is very good, I like the interaction with Nejire. However, dialogues within the system must be rethought, it is difficult to identify who is speaking Thx for chap

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GawS
GawSLv5GawS

thanks for the chapter 👍👍

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AlexPendragon
AlexPendragonLv1AlexPendragon

thanks for the chapter... good day to all who read

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Blincking
BlinckingLv1Blincking

Que traviesa Nejire.

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Aye_itz_cloudz
Aye_itz_cloudzLv14Aye_itz_cloudz

Thxs for the chap

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Ep_E_X
Ep_E_XLv2Ep_E_X

Why didn't he buy the multi shadow clone from orochimaru? That jutsu will save him a lot of trouble..

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Tobi_ntr_king
Tobi_ntr_kingLv4Tobi_ntr_king

i hope he gets zanpakuto

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Daoist866791
Daoist866791Lv2Daoist866791

thanks for the chapter

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Fabianoobinho
FabianoobinhoLv12Fabianoobinho

thx for chapter

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Joshua_Johnson_4664
Joshua_Johnson_4664Lv4Joshua_Johnson_4664

keep up with the great work it's amazing

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DaoistF0koDD
DaoistF0koDDLv2DaoistF0koDD

¡gracias por el capítulo! 😁 👍

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Kenny1243
Kenny1243Lv14Kenny1243

Thank you for the chapter

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Leylin_Farlier99
Leylin_Farlier99Lv14Leylin_Farlier99

TFTC man.

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Sol_Acosta
Sol_AcostaLv1Sol_Acosta

Thanks

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Blackheart99
Blackheart99Lv14Blackheart99

Thanks for the chapter

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