Secretly_A_Villian
pacing's too abrupt, he goes from point A to point B, and back to point A to go to point C with little to no transition. Ideally it's better to add something in between to make these chain of events flow more smoothly.
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I feel wronged for the mc, he doesn't even know why he's being punished. feels like watching a tortured child.
Thank you for the chapter
reads a lot like chat gpt
what a bothersome read
