Comments of chapter undefined of Phantom Lord: First Throne of Horrors
Phantom Lord: First Throne of Horrors
Eminent_Vellichor
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This interaction seemed kind of forced might have been better if u gave him the memories from the guys bodies and had their soul merged and gave him altered self of belonging and care for the sister and have him build him self up type of thing
OzzWorldLv15OzzWorld
I can see that but I more so meant the conversation with fairy seemed force, I was just stating instead of a system memories would’ve helped and had him develop on his own, but that’s probably just preconceived notions and simply because it’s the earlier chapters I’ll continue n see
Eminent_Vellichor:It seems forced cuz you are reading things like this rarely xD Most of the novels have already memories to MC to make it natural when giving memories to make it natural itself is kind of forced in a sense. Here, this is basically MC's personality and how he is carefree and easygoing but has his set of values. He helps ghosts and he helps people, but he is also ruthless and moves according to his constantly expanding and refining way of life. He had been doing this for a long according to the first three chaps, so I don't think him caring for a girl, whose brother's soul allowed him to come to his exciting world (for him) is not forced xD What do you think? xD
