Comments of chapter undefined of Level Up in Highschool of the Dead

Look, its well written but, I feel, like you are falling to the same pit many others that tried to write this novel fell into: Girls.... to many, to fast. (mainly to fast, get 50, I don't care if its done in pacing, either in terms of chapter or chronological, ie time skips and years passed). It turns into a situation where the plot of the TV show (where most know it from) takes 50 chapters or more (pretty basic plot) and most of it feels like filler of girls. Survival, training, growth, plans, travel, etc.... then girls with small in between getting to actually know them. Semi kingdom building, relationships that grow in time. Sure, some of the girls might be fast, but not all, some might be just "I like her", kisses, etc and nothing more for some time. Most novels concentrate on this things: Get the guns from the apartment, get to that girl (maybe save dad, authors tend no too...), go to the parents, save the mother, go to the solider girl..... leave the city (before bomb)... and that is it, rarely (the good ones) make it to an actual base they can build, some island or mountainous valley. The story\world could end here or semi kingdom building, going on on missions to find survivors and technology, resources or jumping to other worlds to get stuff. It's not exactly unique ideas, they were just done on other novels that worked: Harry Potter, Naruto... basically those that are popular enough to have seen all variations. Just my two cents. I do hope it goes well, I like reading it.

Mmm... so in 2 or 3 days it will start... be sure you have the mc buy an aluminum box for his cellphone and place the solad charger there too.

Rika Minami and Saya in the harem? For Shizuka's sake, saving her friend and taking her into the harem would be nice

I feel like giving us the explanation in advance is pointless, sure, some readers are less likely to "dump\ignore her" but the MC doesn't know, which is what matters.

Why even add miku if she just gonna be a hoe?

Спасибо за главу

TftC.

Por que adicionar essa Miku que é uma vagabunda no harém? Tem tantas garotas na obra original, ainda tem também Miwa e Kirigakure que você adicionou a mais e quer que ele fique com essa puta? Ela pode ter o passado triste que for, não muda o fato de ela ser fácil pra krl, além de que ela é inútil no grande esquema das coisas, não vale a pena mais uma boca para alimentar com essa puta, a não ser que você quisesse que ela namorasse o ex-protagonista, aí eu não me importaria, mas o mc ficar com uma mina dessas é realmente ridículo e me fez perder muito a vontade de ler isso. Estava feliz pelo autor brasileiro e história boa, mas adicionar Miku realmente atrapalhou tudo

Another fun chapter, thanks

thanks for the chapter... good day to all who read

Thanks for the chapter

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thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter and can't wait for canon

Merci pour le chapitre

thanks for the chapter

Tyfc

Thanks for the chapter